Feedback from the full group treatment.

 We presented our idea to our teacher and production teacher. We were told that from the first song idea we have to change one of the locations due to the fact that it will be hard for us to find the office location that would work better and will be easier to find or make.

The other thing that was considered by one of our teachers is the fact that drummer playing with the pencils will take only 5 seconds of the whole music video in total.

It was also mentioned that rather than we make drummer play in the office, it will be better for us to make the lead singer start singing in the office, mainly because lead singers are more important than the others in a typical indie rock band. It will be even better if we use metaphoric ways of showing office workers, eg give them hospital drips and make them ill-looking.  One of the main targets for this idea is that we will need to change office location on something that we will. be able to construct easily and that would've suited the song, genre, and vibe of it.

Talking about the feedback from the second idea. The main feedback was about the fact that it will be tricky enough to construct the atmosphere of the 70s club, by using the costumes and the props, due to the fact that it will be tricky to find the most suitable one.

Talking about the 70s set up it will be very hard to create a setup that would look like the 70s and that it will not include any elements of the 'future' eg some elements from the 80s, 90s, etc.  Due to the fact that the singer sounds a little too old, it might be very hard to cast and we might end up with someone who will not suit the song and the voice of the lead singer.  The song itself is rebellious but in the same way serious, so the video has to be the same. The video has to be piss-taking but in the same way, it has to be serious so it has to include all of the elements that you could typically find during the 70s period.